literature

Accidental Killer

Deviation Actions

CynicalMagician's avatar
Published:
200 Views

Literature Text

Dying as you watch
Waiting while she bleeds

Catch yourself a break
She can't even breathe

That's all the time you
have here for tonight

This wasn't the end
Now why can't you see?











.....Destruction.


It's all your fault
       Death
Everyone blames you
       To die in tears
Turn yourself in
       Forgotten words
Give it all up
       Of friendly hate
She is dead now
       Pain
Bame is upon your head
       Destruction
Sing your sorrow out
       Pain. Destruction.

Cry for the dead now
       I don't know why
It's not my fault
       I don't know why
But I didn't mean to
       I don't know why
Oh dear God, why?
       A soul deceased
Couldn't you have stopped me?
       A broken hope
Shouldn't I've stopped myself?
       A choking breeze

She is dead now
       Death
Blame is upon my head
       Destruction
Singing my pain out
       Sorrow. Destruction.

Can't you take me away from my lies?
(Why do they pry with their hateful eyes?)

Pain.
       Destruction.

Her feeble body
       Dark paradise
So easy to
       Collecting souls
to destroy
       To analyze

Why is she dead now
       Death
Sweet little girl
       Destruction

Pain.
       Fear
Hate.
       Destruction

Why did I kill her?
       The bitter blood
So easy to do
       Of a child's cry
You wouldn't believe it
       Inside the truth
But I really wanted to
       Far from my sky

Tears
       Hate
Fear
       Destruction

Can't you take me away from your lies?
(My cold soul, now flying to the sky...)

The pain, it is too much
       The bitter blood
Too much to bear
       Of that child's cry
I can't take it
       Inside the truth
I lay now down to die
       Far from my sky

Fear
       Hate
Love
       Destruction
Ok, so the title sucks. Sue me. No really, do it, that'd be cool.

This is a poem I wrote, based on the song Angel's Punishment by Lacuna Coil, I borrowed a few lines from them, so I'll point that out now, so I don't get in trouble for theft.

If any of you have heard the song, the non-indented parts go with the guitars. The indented parts go with the vocals. Yes, this means that each pair of lines would overlap, but that's why the second ones are indented ;)


Tell me what you think please!
© 2006 - 2024 CynicalMagician
Comments31
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
GentlyEscapes's avatar
That's a pretty nifty concept, overlaying the vocals to instruments and already existing vocals. On top of it being an awesome idea, it reads smooth from beginning to end as well. Awesome.