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Dying as you watch
Waiting while she bleeds
Catch yourself a break
She can't even breathe
That's all the time you
have here for tonight
This wasn't the end
Now why can't you see?
.....Destruction.
It's all your fault
Death
Everyone blames you
To die in tears
Turn yourself in
Forgotten words
Give it all up
Of friendly hate
She is dead now
Pain
Bame is upon your head
Destruction
Sing your sorrow out
Pain. Destruction.
Cry for the dead now
I don't know why
It's not my fault
I don't know why
But I didn't mean to
I don't know why
Oh dear God, why?
A soul deceased
Couldn't you have stopped me?
A broken hope
Shouldn't I've stopped myself?
A choking breeze
She is dead now
Death
Blame is upon my head
Destruction
Singing my pain out
Sorrow. Destruction.
Can't you take me away from my lies?
(Why do they pry with their hateful eyes?)
Pain.
Destruction.
Her feeble body
Dark paradise
So easy to
Collecting souls
to destroy
To analyze
Why is she dead now
Death
Sweet little girl
Destruction
Pain.
Fear
Hate.
Destruction
Why did I kill her?
The bitter blood
So easy to do
Of a child's cry
You wouldn't believe it
Inside the truth
But I really wanted to
Far from my sky
Tears
Hate
Fear
Destruction
Can't you take me away from your lies?
(My cold soul, now flying to the sky...)
The pain, it is too much
The bitter blood
Too much to bear
Of that child's cry
I can't take it
Inside the truth
I lay now down to die
Far from my sky
Fear
Hate
Love
Destruction
Waiting while she bleeds
Catch yourself a break
She can't even breathe
That's all the time you
have here for tonight
This wasn't the end
Now why can't you see?
.....Destruction.
It's all your fault
Death
Everyone blames you
To die in tears
Turn yourself in
Forgotten words
Give it all up
Of friendly hate
She is dead now
Pain
Bame is upon your head
Destruction
Sing your sorrow out
Pain. Destruction.
Cry for the dead now
I don't know why
It's not my fault
I don't know why
But I didn't mean to
I don't know why
Oh dear God, why?
A soul deceased
Couldn't you have stopped me?
A broken hope
Shouldn't I've stopped myself?
A choking breeze
She is dead now
Death
Blame is upon my head
Destruction
Singing my pain out
Sorrow. Destruction.
Can't you take me away from my lies?
(Why do they pry with their hateful eyes?)
Pain.
Destruction.
Her feeble body
Dark paradise
So easy to
Collecting souls
to destroy
To analyze
Why is she dead now
Death
Sweet little girl
Destruction
Pain.
Fear
Hate.
Destruction
Why did I kill her?
The bitter blood
So easy to do
Of a child's cry
You wouldn't believe it
Inside the truth
But I really wanted to
Far from my sky
Tears
Hate
Fear
Destruction
Can't you take me away from your lies?
(My cold soul, now flying to the sky...)
The pain, it is too much
The bitter blood
Too much to bear
Of that child's cry
I can't take it
Inside the truth
I lay now down to die
Far from my sky
Fear
Hate
Love
Destruction
Under the Mountain
Underdark metaphor and connections, which sort of goes over to a WordPress blog.
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Ok, so the title sucks. Sue me. No really, do it, that'd be cool.
This is a poem I wrote, based on the song Angel's Punishment by Lacuna Coil, I borrowed a few lines from them, so I'll point that out now, so I don't get in trouble for theft.
If any of you have heard the song, the non-indented parts go with the guitars. The indented parts go with the vocals. Yes, this means that each pair of lines would overlap, but that's why the second ones are indented
Tell me what you think please!
This is a poem I wrote, based on the song Angel's Punishment by Lacuna Coil, I borrowed a few lines from them, so I'll point that out now, so I don't get in trouble for theft.
If any of you have heard the song, the non-indented parts go with the guitars. The indented parts go with the vocals. Yes, this means that each pair of lines would overlap, but that's why the second ones are indented
Tell me what you think please!
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That's a pretty nifty concept, overlaying the vocals to instruments and already existing vocals. On top of it being an awesome idea, it reads smooth from beginning to end as well. Awesome.